Small Update

After talking to Jack today he mentioned that he didn’t really feel as though the little girls eye reveal was dramatic enough. A quick talk later and I will be rearranging a few shots to create a more dramatic and effective reveal. The shot in question is when the little girl moves the hair from her face and we see the little eye. This doesn’t really work in a dramatic way. I’m going to move it further into the animation, so instead of it being before she starts looking through the photo album it’ll now be just after the grandfather knocks on the door and she turns around. This is more effective because as the little girl looks through the photo album the viewer will question who they are looking at and why, rather than knowing and not caring as much. When I get home I will rearrange the shots, make a new animatic and upload it.